While I only got to see this because of the DD on it, it looks far too busy. Like if you can remove the text in the middle, the title is enough for that.
It shouldn't need to rely on inserted text which looks completely out of place to go "Look, he is feeling depressed!"
And then my sister pointed out that this is probably some sort of book cover or something like that...Then it's still badly composed, sorry. It's the random snow, the random not quite needed sky in the upper left, and the characters who while in the shot don't seem to belong in it. (They aren't covered in snow, unless you count the seemingly random white specks. They don't LOOK cold. Red faces and the like.\ And maybe one guy needs to have a white cloud of a exhaled breath. ... And then my sister points it out to me that THERE IS in fact that... it's just lost in the background, which could be still darker to help contrast it while still being the grey of winter.)
Also the framing of the picture is weird, I can't tell where they are, except maybe there is a bush and a city in the background. Maybe pull the picture back? You can still easily express confusion/whatever with just body language.
Oh and the guy in the foreground? He has a extra joint in his thumb... And on the hand, because of the framing it has to be unnatural with how close it's pressed to the guys chest. It isn't so much of "whats going on with my life" than "What is the depressing shiny thing in my hand.".
I DO like that the clothing, except for the main focuses's hand looks fairly realistic, it isn't "LETS ADD MORE FOLDS, THAT'S WHAT CLOTHING LOOKS LIKE RIT?" the winter coats look heavy and as they should be. The main thing on the hand though,(this goes for the background guy's to.) the gloves look TIGHTER than skin tight. There is no gloves... Just skin paint. Maybe look up some gloves and practice them for a bit.
The thumb, try and mimic that pose yourself, it's phyisically impossible, it's how over stylized it is.(Style not being a bad thing, but over stylized where you just kinda go... Huh... Wut.)
Every finger and thumb on the hand has three joints, the fingers have the Knuckles and so on. One of the thumb's is in the palm. The hand would require another joint to do that, to put the thumb so far out to project it that far.
Unless you know guys that have extra long double jointed thumbs.
Is this a fan art of a series maybe? Or are you completely amzing and it is actually your own fan art of your own story? Or are you still that amazing even though it is just a painting of two seriously hot dudes? XD I this~!